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1. I am walking a tightrope
    between here and forever
    to watch you tend roses.

2. I should have slept
    before the hurricane.
    I was twisting wrought iron
    into silver.
    You are so very loved.

3. He made a monument
    to sorrow and relief
    in the creaking timbers.
    With my bare fingers
    I felt songs in the elegiac blue.

4. Oh, little savior of Tlaxcala,
    I remember your sad eyes.
    Spend yourself forward, into the desert:
    tomorrow has seen you first.

5. Do you remember the last night?
    Streetlights painted slatted stripes
    on four naked shoulders
    and an endtable.

6. I am afraid of losing you.
    that you should go running
    gazelle-like, across savannah.
    You would write to an empty letterbox.
    I would read from far away,
    tragedy through a telescope.

7. There is nothing beyond you.
    Tongues trill empty air into
    sounds thicker than ligaments and bone.
    I lie under, watching life float around me.


I traveled without a suitcase.
Hither and yon, I held hope like a rosary
in prayerful hands.
©2006-2009 ~alyryianis
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Author's Comments

Seven Poems: Traveling Without a Suitcase
after Mark Strand

Really, seven poems and an epilogue.
Each one is intended for someone or something.

Daily Deviation

Given 2007-01-20

Seven Poems by ~alyryianis: exactly what the title says. Seven little poems, each with their own moments of ekstasia. (Featured by `PoeticWar)

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I liked 1, 7, and t3h epilouge most. nice work!

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:iconalyryianis:
thank you!

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Wow. You are existing in another dimension. I am in awe.

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:iconalyryianis:
Thank you so much. I appreciate and return your awe. :)

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I like #2, so very loved.

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Ending a sentence with a preposition is something up with which I will not put -Winston Churchill

If I could tell you what it meant there would be no point in dancing it -Isadora Duncan
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I like it.... I like it....

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"Oh, it is...... but we F**King need it" ~Aqua Teen Hungerforce

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:iconalyryianis:
Thank you! :)

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Stop bitching, start a revolution.
:iconalyryianis:
Thank you so so much. I'm rather fond of that one too. It's for my mother. :)

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Stop bitching, start a revolution.
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really loving and adoring the last one<3

<3
kat

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"Heres looking at you kid."
-Casablanca

"Happy families are all alike; each unhappy family is unhappy in its own way."
-Anna Karenina

"And he even wept. He was sentimental. He was wicked and sentimental."
-The Brothers Karamazov
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you are so incredible, so beautiful. I love this, and I love you.

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and the reason that i laugh and breathe is oh love, and the reason i do not fall into this street is love.
-e.e. cummings

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